I have no idea why I tried this, but if you want to give feedback please feel free to do so. I would like to know what you think: even if you say this is crap! Thanks
24 year old, currently living in Auckland, New Zealand. My blog is about my life, my hand at trying to click good photos and sometimes writing short stories.
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12 thoughts on “Daily Prompt: Scent (Poetry attempt)”
Hi!
We were taught traditional haiku poetry in school once, and if my memory isn’t failing me, I think the poem has three lines, where the first and last lines have 5 syllables, and the middle one has 7 syllables.
Apart from the technicalities, this was a good try. 🙂
P.S.: I am a biology student and I am duty bound to inform you that nectarless flowers have other ways to encourage pollination. 😛
Hi!
We were taught traditional haiku poetry in school once, and if my memory isn’t failing me, I think the poem has three lines, where the first and last lines have 5 syllables, and the middle one has 7 syllables.
Apart from the technicalities, this was a good try. 🙂
P.S.: I am a biology student and I am duty bound to inform you that nectarless flowers have other ways to encourage pollination. 😛
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Oh, this post has generously embarrassed me. Well you are just doing your duty 😛
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Hey, nothing to be embarrassed of!
I’m just extremely nerdy so can never give up am opportunity to talk about things I know. 😅
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I know that feeling!
Is your wordpress username Paradoxical Sadness?
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Yeah! Why do you ask?
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Because I just saw it and I can say it is a great username. Not that sadness is great but your take on it. I gotta check out your blog now
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Oh!
Thanks, I guess?
Feel free to drop by! 🙂
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yeah a weird sort of compliment
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:))
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I don’t know… I am not the Expert in Haiku 😉 This is just how it sounds to me 🙂
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It’s interesting, but I am not sure if it is HAIKU… ?!?
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Its not? Damn I need to change the title.
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