Daily Prompt: Scent (Poetry attempt)

daily prompt 1 Minute

What is smell but a trap?

Scented flower buds attract

Killing bees and insects

Unscented buds die hungry.

 

 

I have no idea why I tried this, but if you want to give feedback please feel free to do so. I would like to know what you think: even if you say this is crap! Thanks

Published by itsmayurremember

24 year old, currently living in Auckland, New Zealand. My blog is about my life, my hand at trying to click good photos and sometimes writing short stories.

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12 thoughts on “Daily Prompt: Scent (Poetry attempt)”

  1. Hi!
    We were taught traditional haiku poetry in school once, and if my memory isn’t failing me, I think the poem has three lines, where the first and last lines have 5 syllables, and the middle one has 7 syllables.
    Apart from the technicalities, this was a good try. 🙂
    P.S.: I am a biology student and I am duty bound to inform you that nectarless flowers have other ways to encourage pollination. 😛

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