What is smell but a trap?
Scented flower buds attract
Killing bees and insects
Unscented buds die hungry.
I have no idea why I tried this, but if you want to give feedback please feel free to do so. I would like to know what you think: even if you say this is crap! Thanks
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Hi!
We were taught traditional haiku poetry in school once, and if my memory isn’t failing me, I think the poem has three lines, where the first and last lines have 5 syllables, and the middle one has 7 syllables.
Apart from the technicalities, this was a good try. 🙂
P.S.: I am a biology student and I am duty bound to inform you that nectarless flowers have other ways to encourage pollination. 😛
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Oh, this post has generously embarrassed me. Well you are just doing your duty 😛
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Hey, nothing to be embarrassed of!
I’m just extremely nerdy so can never give up am opportunity to talk about things I know. 😅
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I know that feeling!
Is your wordpress username Paradoxical Sadness?
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Yeah! Why do you ask?
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Because I just saw it and I can say it is a great username. Not that sadness is great but your take on it. I gotta check out your blog now
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Oh!
Thanks, I guess?
Feel free to drop by! 🙂
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yeah a weird sort of compliment
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:))
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I don’t know… I am not the Expert in Haiku 😉 This is just how it sounds to me 🙂
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It’s interesting, but I am not sure if it is HAIKU… ?!?
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Its not? Damn I need to change the title.
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