Daily Prompt: Scent (Poetry attempt)


What is smell but a trap?

Scented flower buds attract

Killing bees and insects

Unscented buds die hungry.

 


 

I have no idea why I tried this, but if you want to give feedback please feel free to do so. I would like to know what you think: even if you say this is crap! Thanks

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12 thoughts on “Daily Prompt: Scent (Poetry attempt)

  1. Hi!
    We were taught traditional haiku poetry in school once, and if my memory isn’t failing me, I think the poem has three lines, where the first and last lines have 5 syllables, and the middle one has 7 syllables.
    Apart from the technicalities, this was a good try. 🙂
    P.S.: I am a biology student and I am duty bound to inform you that nectarless flowers have other ways to encourage pollination. 😛

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